Nowadays a traditional wedding scheme is replaced by not ordinary ceremony, which make the wedding day more unique and memorable. There are weddings in the old-fashioned Victorian style, Japanese style with tea – ceremony and Latin- American style with dances. Newlyweds tend to choose unconventional venues for a wedding ceremony, such as the mountains, a beach, under water and even in the sky with the parachutes. Grooms sometimes wear knight armors or batmen costumes, brides chose the unusual color for a wedding dress such as green, yellow or even black. Familiar celebration in a restaurant is replaced by skating, roller skating, bike riding and scuba diving. Such bright wedding creates about great memories of family life unique beginning.
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Wow, this is an exceptional paragraph, the best you've ever written! Good job. You have an introductory sentence, a number of examples (good examples, very precise), and a conclusion.
I would add a few more linking words (so this doesn't feel "dry"), and then correct the following mistakes:
wedding, not "weeding,"
articles: in the old-fashioned style...
instead of "Latin" I'd say "Latin-American", if that's what you mean. Because when I think of Latin I think of middle ages.
choose, not "chose"
venues sounds better (if you use location, use it in plural)
catholic church (???): I didn't think it was unconventional... I guess I'm living in a Catholic part of the world...
mountains is better than rocks,
Grooms *sometimes* wear
is replaced BY
common celebration (better familiar celebration)
scuba diving
wedding bringS (but better creates) great memories of the unique family life beginning.
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